renegade1800 ...Just read your June story. I think this was one of your better ones but it is very hard to decide they are all good! ...I especially liked the March story! It was well written and cute. Can't wait for next months entry. Bravo ... I enjoyed your stories and imagination and I'm looking forward to "Pinch of the Irish" Good job, Anthony cayenne1011 ...Rusti, I read a few of your writings and, well, let's just say...interesting. You write very well and remind me of myself - writing creates a sense of belonging. Continued good luck in all your endeavors Rusti. Take care. ...you convey thoughts and create storylines very well. I am impressed and will be checking on your November entry when it arrives. It's always nice to make a new friend and when that person has impressive talent, as you do, all the better!! -- what a beautifully written and appropriate December story! A preacher to say the least! Who would have known! ...Looking good. I have read the stories. Bravo! More! ...Good evening snowflake! I just finished reading your December romance. I must say, I really loved it. The pictures it conjured up in my mind of the snow and the house and the family gathering were heart warming. Thank you. I also was smitten by the characters. You are masterful. The romance you are creating is all consuming. ...I have read all of your writings posted here with supreme interest. You move me with said writings. ...Your story made my 52yr old female manager cry at the end so I think you are doing a great job. If she is indicative of the demo you are trying to hit, you are on target. nicelegstostandon ...Im still reading..first one was "Its Customary"--..of course...being from colorado...and the secret crop--I saw that one coming..!--it was fun to read, entertaining, the description of the environment and home was awesome.....And I really appreciated how you put the brother and sister in a competition(including from years gone back) and a couple other insights into that story(what alex did for a living--that makes me wonder if thats your interest-what you do, as well..!?....and of course I went way to the end after the second paragraph of the story, reading the last paragraph...to see what the ending was going to be....and I liked it..so I read the entirety..it seems you have a lot of lifes experiences to draw from...!!--So IM glad I found a fellow writer(though IM not published and am concentrating more on country songs instead--ie..the area I live in lends itself to that!)....I would like to see(so I will have to read your other stories) some even finer descriptive paragraphs from your writing when it involves the romance, the fire, the snow, whatever the surrounding environment, and a couple romancing each other...you have a wonderful creative and imaginative mind...!!!...My name is Grant by the way...I work as a mgr/inv mgr in a large starbucks warehouse..and I teach tennis lessons sometimes....!!---and yes...growing up in colorado...was awesome!!--but it has changed sooooooooo much...there are no secret places anymore--alll the spots have been shared....possibly with the exception of underground caves...but heh...I have to draw the line somewhere!!!--SO THERE it is..my request then...a future story of yours involving underground caves!!--heroism, tragedy, rescue, romance, unique beauty, darkness, the unknown..lots of possible material....!!talk to you later...!!--Grant!! | Comments about the Author: ghost_75801 ...woman! ur good! I'm very impressed! hope to read more! dawhartontx ...Oh my God, you are good! knightinsa ...Your story is an incredible one. Very romantic in itself. Please continue to let your words be expressed through the stories that you have written. freecem3 ...I read your info in the "about me tab". It is nice to hear that there is someone pursuing their dream. Not many of us have the guts to do it, fear of failure, and existing commitments. Hope you continue your adventure. |